Leonardo Chara

Rookie - 26 Points (August / Nigeria.)

To My First Love. - Poem by Leonardo Chara

When my eyes opened it was you i saw,
and i felt love uncut and raw.
You were so fine that i couldn't ignore,
and everyday i loved more.
Even after fate threw us apart,
you still remained in my heart.
Perhaps it's now hard for you to believe,
but such love did my heart once conceive;
and for you and only you it was,
PURE-without a cause.
Alas! How cruel the works of fate,
that such love it had to frustrate.
Now all that is left is misery,
cos i'm still in love with your memory.

Comments about To My First Love. by Leonardo Chara

  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/14/2010 12:35:00 AM)

    PURE-without a cause.

    Good expressionism.
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  • (2/9/2010 5:33:00 PM)

    Wonderful, that was a lovely poem that showed the deepness of your feelings and expressed the emotion very well. Keep writing. Try separating your poem into lines, it makes it easier to read and helps the reader distinguish were to pause. I loved the poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 10, 2010

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