Sunday, September 9, 2007

To The Man On Page Three Comments

Rating: 4.5

I hear solemnly on the morning news
Of another too soon tragedy over sea.
I turn the pages of the newspaper
And find a self portrait staring back at me.
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Frederick Francis
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Kingsley Dorian 12 October 2007

I love the last stanza, it has an excellent finish. The last line hits you like a hammer-blow. You poems are meditations on the life all around us. You've opened your eyes to your surroundings and you've put it all down on paper. I raise my glass to you, I take my hat off for you.

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