Saturday, October 31, 2015

To Walk Like This In Old Age Comments

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TO WALK LIKE THIS IN OLD AGE

Is there ever feeling more alive than this
Walking into the wind
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Shalom Freedman
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Brian Mayo 31 October 2015

Yes, and then you come home, turn on the news and see a 4 year-old girl dying of cancer. Your poem wastes few words, which I like. You capture what must be a unique feeling very well with your strong, enviable finish.

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