Thursday, February 23, 2012

Today I Am Wearing Mostly Yellow Comments

Rating: 4.3

Vivid yellow ants
Scuttling, to follow
The Plan
A Design
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Martin O'Neill
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Adi Cox 13 April 2012

I like the idea of workman as yellow ants with their high visibility jackets on and I like those big words you use, but my favorite part is the way you describe time passing on the site where the movement of the sun and clouds reflect in the glass. It is such a great way to visualize time passing by. I guess that you are the content man with the plan at the end of the poem. This is a very satisfying poem to read :)

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Patti Masterman 02 March 2012

I think yellow is supposed to be cheerful. I admit this made me feel cheered up for some reason (smile) .

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