Today I Saw A Hedgehog. Poem by Graham Jones

Today I Saw A Hedgehog.

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Today I saw a Hedgehog
A funny looking thing
He crept across the lawn outside
As I sat watching him

He snuffled through the leaves and grass
His nose twitched like a snake
And then he stopped quite suddenly
As he came across a rake

At first he rolled into a ball
Quite comical to see
Then slowly poked his head out
And I'm sure he winked at me

Once more he turned towards the rake
Who's spines looked somewhat higher
And slowly moved toward it
With what to me, looked like desire

First he nudged it with his nose
Then rubbed against the prongs
Then getting no reaction
Seemed to sense that somethings wrong

And then he tried to mount it
But that just came to grief
And shuffled off indignantly
Which came as some relief

And so I've learned a moral
From this hedgehog in his teens
Things that we take for granted
Are not always as they seem.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Reynolds 28 March 2006

Graham, have you considered re-naming this, 'The Rake's Hogrest'? Very good. Danny.

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Sylvia Spencer 18 March 2006

I called your Hedgehog Harry, because I fell fell in love with him. We had a hedgehog for years living in our front garden. We found him one morning dead at the bottom of the Drive. He is buried amonst a bed of Daffs. I still feel sad about it, his name was Henry.I love your work Graham you write such tender poems about the other world, the world of wildlife and nature. Cheers Syvie

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Linda Ori 01 February 2006

Graham - reminds me of the hedgehog one of my boys had as a child. A very different animal - but really interesting to watch. You describe it beautiifully! Linda

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