Today We Kissed For A Long Time In Castle. Poem by Liza Sud

Today We Kissed For A Long Time In Castle.

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Today we kissed for a long time in castle.
you were the first who started it so free.
And your lips opened to me so subtly,
when you yourself were liying over me.

And we were only kissing for a long time,
then went along the windows in a pass.
And the castle was lofty and enormous,
and the wall stones were very black inside,

We walked in silence, and the days disclosed.
outside the windows dreams in roses shone.
and nothing was explained in dreams of roses,
and not a single question there was posed,

We went in silence as the parts in one heart.
as always, we pronounced not a word,
there are no words in the Language of Sunday.
it's only waves of Good by which He talks.

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Сегодня в замке долго целовались,
ты первая свободно начала.
и губы твои нежно открывались,
когда ты на меня сама легла.

Мы только целовались долго-долго.
и мимо окон в коридоре шли.
и замок был огромным и высоким,
а камни были черными внутри.

Мы тихо шли, и дни нам раскрывались,
за окнами сияли сны из роз.
и ничего в тех снах не объяснялось,
и не был задан ни один вопрос.

Мы тихо шли, как будто в одном сердце,
и, как всегда, ни слова ни сказав.
Ибо не знает слов Язык Воскресный,
но говорит лишь волнами Добра.

Wednesday, February 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,kiss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 01 February 2017

Your poem opens with an extended love scene, initiated by the other person but with the speaker's full participation. Then the two of them walk through their setting, a vast but empty castle. They are in perfect sync as if they shared one heart. They have no need to talk but eagerly look at a mysterious dreamlike garden of roses. It's as if they inhabited a dream of utmost calm and beauty, as if they were in a waking dream. Their intimacy now is not that of lovers sharing physical closeness but of blessed spirits in a spiritually heightened place of being. I believe but I'm not certain they have entered the presence of God.

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