Together Poem by daniel kim

Together

Rating: 5.0


Our fingertips trail along, as a dove
glides of guiding wings,
appearing to our faces, of
love singing smiles.

Within love,
as father you’ve proclaimed
a profound kiss
upon our melting hearts,

they burn as a shining star
in the mist of fallen color,
as while the air joins
of bondage in our hands…
instant blink,
we collide!

The value...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 19 October 2009

'Our fingertips trail along, as a dove / glides of guiding wings, / appearing to our faces, of / love singing smiles...' They are wonderful lines.

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buenos aires, argentina
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