Friday, March 14, 2008

Tonight... Comments

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My heart is racing like the speed of light.
im holding you hand, ohh so tight.
i'd hug you with all my might.
i dont think i wanna let go tonight.
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Dislocated Heart
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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 15 March 2008

fantastic poem...i just wish that that could have been me with you there ..it will mean the world to me awesome job! -curly

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Jurietta Duraan 15 March 2008

This rings a true bell within me.... all of us dream about that little escape and some of the lucky ones actually live it..... very good poem

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