Monday, March 13, 2006

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Drip, drip, drip... blood on the floor
Can't stop the blood; it's coming... more and more
I've dropped the blade to get a rag
To mop up the blood that holds my pain
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Meagan Miller
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Charles Chaim Wax 13 March 2006

the dark times no escape they come to us all the dim hum of despair all lost and yet somewhere a poem elopes with the heart and gives joy to the world

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Brian Dorn 13 March 2006

Meagan, Excellent write on a difficult subject. You have a lot of talent. Keep writing, it's a great release. Brian

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Meagan Miller

Bastrop, LA
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