Friday, July 23, 2010

Too Long Forth Comments

Rating: 2.7

The earth did not move
Nor stars changed in heavens
Inner cosmos was in revolution
He decided never to get up
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Indira Babbellapati 23 July 2010

right from the first few lines, the theme is obvious...i liked the flow and the way you crafted the poem...

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