Thursday, September 7, 2006

Torrid Love..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

John and Sam, this story untold,
race the track, speed their gold,
race the oval for checkered flag,
truth untold, makes heart sag.
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Geoff Warden
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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 07 February 2008

Great poem Geoff! The story was intrigueing and made you want to read it. Interesting and full of imagery! Keep up the Great work my friend.....p.s Happy New Year! ! ! Shelley

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Ruby Root 08 September 2006

Hi Geoff, Facinating story, I think you watch to many soaps (ha ha) Just teasing. Oh well. Excellent poem, I enjoyed it. Take care.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 September 2006

SIR GEOFF......Intruiging story...suspensefull & enjoyable...like the cliche effect.... So was it all real, tour dream, their dream....anybodies anything? or just some good ole fashioned' Reader Teaser '...Good Job, Good Sir! '''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Geoff Warden

Geoff Warden

London Ontario Canada
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