Totally Dude Poem by sara Rodriguez

Totally Dude



being seen is one thing,
but acting as if i am invisible
is totally miserable.

i never thought it would turn out this
way because we have gone afray.

my life is not the same.
i was totally 100% devoted to what
i thought true love was.
but you broke me down into nothing more than a drug
my love for you remains the same
but now i got to change my game.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bright Rose 22 May 2009

sweet 'to listen to' poem that naturally rhymes, lovely and smooth flow of words and such a brilliant idea, well done Sara

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