Friday, October 15, 2010

Towards The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Warm sea salt and ocean's brine
Lifts dull spirits that contently reside
In the souls of broken pride
Rocking boats and clean white sails
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Taylor Coleman
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Jean Dament 15 October 2010

I loved how you wove your ideas about the sea & life together here so well. There is a lovely natural flow of rhythm & rhyme too within. I gave it a 10. Spiritsong

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