Monday, April 13, 2009

Tragic Story

Rating: 3.5
There once was cheer.
When you were near
But now you’ve vanished
My life has finished
Out of my heart,
You are no longer a part
Of who I am

You leave me now to fight alone
With lies that chill me to the bone
I want not now what I did before
I just want you back, please come knocking on my door…
You... don't... want me...
Costa Anakiev 19 April 2009
Janay, very sincere and well written, but the last line is very long
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Barry A. Lanier 18 April 2009
Sensing from your poetry Janay you have lost someone dear to you....hoping that your writing can be sharing the pain shared diminished in time...and the road to healing and recovery begins...not only write about it but find a friend and counselor to discuss it with.....
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