Tranquility Poem by Jake Gassiot

Tranquility

Rating: 3.6


I sit high in this tree
In complete tranquility

This bed of ropes
I tied with hopes
That I could find
A state of mind
In this tree
Of tranquility

My frustrated soul
Searching for its goal
Climbing the ropes oh life
Past the knots of strife
In this tree
Of tranquility

I sit here now
Sweat on my brow
Looking into the sky
This is how I fly
In this tree
Of tranquility

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gabriella Franco 23 August 2006

mm wonderfully done, Iw ondered what the big 'punch line', if you will, at the end would be. I love this one. and the analogy is very impressive... good job! : -P Gabriela

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Chase Goody 08 May 2006

this is beautiful, i like it bunches

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