Tranquility Poem by Jake Gassiot

Tranquility

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I sit high in this tree
In complete tranquility

This bed of ropes
I tied with hopes
That I could find
A state of mind
In this tree
Of tranquility

My frustrated soul
Searching for its goal
Climbing the ropes oh life
Past the knots of strife
In this tree
Of tranquility

I sit here now
Sweat on my brow
Looking into the sky
This is how I fly
In this tree
Of tranquility

Sunday, May 7, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gabriella Franco 23 August 2006

mm wonderfully done, Iw ondered what the big 'punch line', if you will, at the end would be. I love this one. and the analogy is very impressive... good job! : -P Gabriela

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Chase Goody 08 May 2006

this is beautiful, i like it bunches

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