Trapped Poem by Evelyn Macdonald

Trapped

Rating: 5.0


Trapped within this aging face
I long so to be free
Reflected in the mirror
A woman, that's not me

Where's the young girl that I knew
Not so very long ago
I have to keep on searching
Till I find the one I know

The person looking back at me
I do not recognize
And yet I see resemblance
As I gaze into her eyes

I trace the lines upon her brow
The creases round her nose
I stare so long, she winks at me
And strikes a knowing pose

It's only me the face replies
A bit older, that is true
Come back and visit me again
When you're ready to be you

Monday, February 2, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: trapped
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Gatiens 26 January 2018

Lovely words that remind us that beauty is only skin deep! 💜

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Fiona Davidson 02 February 2009

Now this one a lot of us can relate to Evelyn...thank you...good write...

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Laurie Hill 02 February 2009

Lovely...............don't go the botox route: 0) 10

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Anthony Foster 02 February 2009

Like it well written good thoughtfull conclusion.

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Evelyn Macdonald

Evelyn Macdonald

Leven, Fifeshire, Scotland
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