Trapped Within Poem by I'd Like to be Anonymous

Trapped Within

Rating: 5.0


I look up and feel powerless
Down and find shame.
Glance sideways come guilt,
but backwards shoots pain.

Across to see wanting,
over, see flame.
Under lays adventure,
yet foward in vain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hermione Femalton 07 December 2008

I love this. I'm not sure what makes it so captivating but it's beautifully written.

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