Gabrielle Smith


Travelling The White Line Aka Running From Home - Poem by Gabrielle Smith

Travelling the white line
Destination unknown
Travelling the white line

Homesick blues.
Cold coffee blues
Sad blues
Happy blues

Travelling the white line
Straight ahead
Travelling the white line
Destination...
Unknown

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Comments about Travelling The White Line Aka Running From Home by Gabrielle Smith

  • (5/12/2010 12:45:00 AM)


    It's supposed to be someone running from home.
    They are scared and worried- blues
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  • (5/11/2010 11:50:00 PM)


    Another good concept which could have been-and still could be-expanded on. What does the white line signify? If you weren't so young, I'd immediately think cocaine. Check out my own take on the blues called Blues @ Lullaby Time...in my library. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 12, 2010


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