Travelling The White Line Aka Running From Home Poem by Gabrielle Smith

Travelling The White Line Aka Running From Home



Travelling the white line
Destination unknown
Travelling the white line

Homesick blues.
Cold coffee blues
Sad blues
Happy blues

Travelling the white line
Straight ahead
Travelling the white line
Destination...
Unknown

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gabrielle Smith 12 May 2010

It's supposed to be someone running from home. They are scared and worried- blues

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Yoni Assis 11 May 2010

Another good concept which could have been-and still could be-expanded on. What does the white line signify? If you weren't so young, I'd immediately think cocaine. Check out my own take on the blues called Blues @ Lullaby Time...in my library.

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