Trending Downward Poem by douglas lewis

Trending Downward

Rating: 4.8


I am in a spiral.
Nothing solid.
A gurgling coil
Being sucked
Into the ground.
No rungs to hold
And have a thought,
No platform
To plead my case.
I am in the eye
Of a horror.

Sunday, July 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Milos Jovanka 02 July 2017

I understand this all to well, the idea of having lost thoughts out of control, physically deaf to a world that cant hear. Buried alive under the weight of the world. All to understandable. A wonderful poem, you are not alone.

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Rajnish Manga 02 July 2017

There are times when we are lost in a quagmire of hopelessness and abyss of depression. Just no way out in sight. Nicely portrayed. This calls for a genuine moral support. Thanks for sharing.

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