Tribute ***** Hole In Your Heart Poem by Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

Tribute ***** Hole In Your Heart

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to all who were my critics
and still are

When I vanish
in flesh
in soul
in spirit
in touch of yours
and in your sight

don't dig a hole
lies on earth
but a hole
deep down in your heart

with memories
pumping as your heartbeat
with thoughts
beating as your pulse

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with memories pumping as your heartbeat with thoughts beating as your pulse..... what an cheritable dream with all blessings for the critics.... good write i am impressed.....10 read mine jackson is no more and luminous star gone....thanks

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Kristille Marchan 29 April 2009

very nice poem kuya..! ! ! !

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Janell Cressman 28 April 2009

that is really good! ! ! ! ! i think it is a good way of saying that when your gone you hope to still be here I liked it, you should check your in box in between posting new poems! !

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a.k.a. Jetfellow Marchanism
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