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with memories pumping as your heartbeat with thoughts beating as your pulse..... what an cheritable dream with all blessings for the critics.... good write i am impressed.....10 read mine jackson is no more and luminous star gone....thanks

very nice poem kuya..! ! ! !

that is really good! ! ! ! ! i think it is a good way of saying that when your gone you hope to still be here I liked it, you should check your in box in between posting new poems! !