Trigger Poem by Carrie Salazar

Trigger

Rating: 5.0


She packs her things.
She leaves the gun on the table.
She looks at all the pictures.

Is this worth it she thinks?
Do I really want to do this?
She will miss him.

He is with another girl.
He is sleeping with her.
He wouldn’t even notice

She picks the gun up
She puts a bullet in it.
Will she shoot herself?

What does she have left?
He took it all.
She will miss him always.

She can’t take it anymore.
She picks up the gun and
Puts it in her mouth.

Dear lord please forgive me
For I have sinned please accept as ur child
Forgive him please lord make sure they know I love them.
Thank u
She then pulls the trigger

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
isabelle Cote 15 May 2009

scary..sorta..but very powerful 1. Your reading my comment 2. Now your saying/thinking thats a stupid fact. 4. You didnt notice that i skipped 3. 5. Your checking it now. 6. Your smiling. 7. Your still reading my comment. 8. You know all you have read is true. 10. You didnt notice that i skipped 9. 11. Your checking it now. 12. You didnt notice there are only 10 facts Copy and paste to 1 poem, tomorrow will be your best day ever! no matter what

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