Troubled Poem by Diane Catherine Kordas

Troubled

Rating: 5.0


Why am I here,
Hurting myself,
Unable to do anything right?
I just mess everything up...
I shouldn't be here,
Hurting myself
And others
I don't make a difference
I am just a waste if matter,
Giving up means
They have won
But staying means
I have to smile
Through the pain...

Monday, December 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written on 11/05/2014
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 21 January 2016

An insightful depiction of sadness, occasioned by loss of self in a dilemma, an awkward predicament in which one finds oneself totally confused. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Diane. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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