Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Troubled Teen Comments

Rating: 5.0

feelings burst like wild fires
that can't be contained
willing to do anything to feel closer to one another
mind filled with pleasure but doesn't
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mikal crawford
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without a name Face 15 June 2011

it's short but as Mohd said it's strong, well done and you put to flight your regrets, thoughts and ponders, well done.

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without a name Face 15 June 2011

it's short but as Mohd said it's strong, well done and you put to flight your regrets, thoughts and ponders, well done.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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