Tuesday, July 15, 2008

True Friendship Comments

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To me white lilies signify.
Ceremonies when people die.
The sad occasions we attend
to mourn a relative or friend.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Vincent James Turner 15 July 2008

This is a really nice poem, your rhyming in this poem is really good, and I really like the message that is within this piece. You make good use of your repetition, and it helps carry the poem on without misdirecting the reader. I particularly liked Stanza four and eight these stood out for me. Regardo Vincent

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Vincent James Turner 15 July 2008

This is a really nice poem, your rhyming in this poem is really good, and I really like the message that is within this piece. You make good use of your repetition, and it helps carry the poem on without misdirecting the reader. I particularly liked Stanza four and eight these stood out for me. Regardo Vincent

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Vincent James Turner 15 July 2008

This is a really nice poem, your rhyming in this poem is really good, and I really like the message that is within this piece. You make good use of your repetition, and it helps carry the poem on without misdirecting the reader. I particularly liked Stanza four and eight these stood out for me. Regardo Vincent

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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