True Love Poem by lindsay rose

True Love

Rating: 5.0


is true love really forever
can forever really be true
in you i found a soul mate
and my world became about you

i love you more then anything
i wish that you would see
with out you in my life
theres no reson for be to be

i fit just right in your arms
theres no more time for tears
im right where i belong
in this world i have no fears

then i open my eyes and see
that nothings like it seems
the world is sad and lonley
because your only in my dreams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jen Capaldi 13 October 2009

beautifully written lindsay. exuisetly written it takes your reader down one path and spins them in another in your last heartfealt stanza or your waking thoughts. great write. keep on wirting. it's the one thing that is always there for you no matter how you feel.10+++ Jen

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