My Friends Poem by lindsay rose

My Friends

Rating: 4.0


sitting all alone
thinking about the past
now that its done and over with
it all went by so fast

the friendships we have are timeless
the good times well never forget
we talk about old party times
and were we all first met

well all be friends forever
though sometimes we must part
as long as we remember
well feel it in our hearts

we have had a lot of good times
and we had a few bad
well just have to remember
every time we get sad

well always be friends forever
were stuck together like glue
people try and pull us apart
but theres nothing we can do

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 30 July 2009

well done! ! i give it a ten

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Obinna Eruchie 29 July 2009

Interesting piece about the bond of friendship.

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Noel Horlanda 16 July 2009

be careful of your spelling such as in the second stanza, were we all meat, should be met. Anyway the theme idea is good, it's all about bonding of friendship. At least a good write. thanks

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Timothy Hector 14 July 2009

reminds me of the group of close friends i had when i moved away. not even 1000km's could tear us apart. thank you one of my fave's. good to stop and appreciate your friends. i am going to call them now :)

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