Monday, August 4, 2014

Truth Comments

Rating: 3.5

Shut your mouth and listen to what I have to say,
I'm going to take you back to that one specific day.
I was laying in bed alone while listening to you and him talk on the phone.
You said, 'Well if they have the money I don't see why not,
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jade Slatyer
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Simon Odhiambo 13 August 2014

This poem kills me...it sinks deep into the readers mind and sob...sob...sob it hurts. Well written, emotions well elicited...readers attention captured.

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Stephen Katona 05 August 2014

I dearly hope you have found people who are truly caring, and that you find happiness despite all that has happened.

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