Friday, November 27, 2015

Tum Ho Meri Roshni Comments

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Andhere se bhare us kamre m
Jahan ka har kona roshni se mehroom tha
Na pata tha jahan subha k ane ka raat k hone ka
Dino k ane ka shamon k beetne ka
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abhilasha bhatt
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Rajnish Manga 05 January 2017

The poem is steeped in mysticism and reminds me of the writings of many Sufi saints and of Khalil Gibran. The narrative is Quite thought provoking. In a way, it describes the yearning of man for the divine bliss in life. Thanks for sharing, Abhilasha ji. Mere ghr ko jisne roshan kia apne ane se Ye dhudh si ujli hui hansi hoti h Kya khuda ki ek beinteha khoobsurat nazm ho jaise

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Akhtar Jawad 29 January 2016

When love came suddenly as beams of light, the dark room of heart sometimes became a sun, sometimes it became a moon, I became restless as a sea in tide, life and death got a meaning, life my beloved and death my bride, what a magic love? at the moment my beloved is into my arms, but I am fully prepared for my bride's charms, I assure you my bride after I kiss you, I shall smile with peace, an immortal smile, but as long as my beloved is with me, I am now moderate, no more a sun so bright, no more a moon for the tides, In love I am twinkling like a star, the journey that started at dusk, making me an evening star, I know will end at the dawn, I shall end my journey as a morning star.

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