Thursday, May 12, 2011

Twinkle Twinkle Little Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dripping, dripping broken heart
Who, I wonder, tore you apart
Blood that once flowed through your soul
Now leaks out that gaping hole
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 May 2011

Great rythmic flow. Remarkable imagery. Wonderfully written. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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