Dawn Ferrett

Rookie - 138 Points (Portsmouth, Hampshire)

Two Birthday Card Greetings! - Poem by Dawn Ferrett

1)
Some birthday cards are humurous
With jokes that make you smile,
Others are cute, with kittens on,
Or cherubs that beguile.
Some have flowery greetings,
Some, sentimental verse.
Some poke fun at someone's age,
While others - well, they're worse!
But my favourite kind of card is one
That comes straight from the heart.
No wit or soppy message. Just -

Happy birthday, you old f...! ! ! !

2)
Some cards are huge and colourful,
With greetings bright and cheerful.
Others are sweet or touching
And can make you feel quite tearful.
There are funny cards with jokes in,
Enough to make you titter.
Home-made cards, pricey cards
And ones all covered in glitter.
Some can be rather age-ist,
Making fun out of getting old.
While others contain messages
That are worth much more than gold.
Some cards are sentimental,
The rhymes inside quite corny,
But not this one - it simply reads:

Happy Birthday, love from Dawnie


Comments about Two Birthday Card Greetings! by Dawn Ferrett

  • Heather Wilson (4/16/2012 6:15:00 AM)


    Brilliant, I loved it so well written and funny (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 16, 2012



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