Friday, July 10, 2009

Two Children Comments

Rating: 5.0

A star was shining on down to a child
Who was just so lovely, so tender and mild
She wished for a kiss and to be far away
And hoped that it all would come true some day.
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Nina Dringo
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Cory Davis 10 July 2009

Wow, very moving. I love the imagery and the rhyme scheme.

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