U & I Poem by Briana Knight

U & I

Rating: 5.0


A piece of U hang around my neck.
It was Urs, though it was a part of me.
My touch! Yes, delivered with Ur hand but it belonged to me.
As i belonged to U.










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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 23 August 2012

the dramatic use of past tense heightens the impact its silent sullen defeat and torment is amplified..... nice...liked it

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