U R My First Love Poem by moon light

U R My First Love

Rating: 1.5


i try to pick u
out of my mind

but
cannot
time passes unknowingly
and u still ignore me

although i will find
sb
i think i cant love as u

u still my first n prescious love
I LOVE U
i m saying this words
from my heart

not from my lips
i realli love u
not cos of your appearance
but cos of your mind

thats the thing i hard to
pick out
humm
u ve great personality
but
i cant understand

u treat me not nice
=(
i feel so sad now

i think u r my forever one
i will remember u always

boy
i will say the old thing
but it is my true feeling
' i love u'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ibrahim Hydarah 02 December 2006

dear moon light...you must just correct your writing..you used to write in short latters..like: u...cos...etc..the poetry does not except like this..please..don, t kill your greats motions in your poems by these things.

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