Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Unbecoming Comments

Rating: 5.0

A gunny sack was full of bleached skulls.
What now? Do I attend the auction
of mortal wounds in hidden valley of dust?
The arsenal of seductive weapons was a snub
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Satish Verma
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Sameer Gardner 23 June 2011

A brilliant and hard hitting piece! Please do read my poems if you have the time m still budding and would love your insight...

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Catrina Heart 17 March 2009

The unbecoming of people... merciless, ruthless, savage being of the society. This is the point what this poem conveys at. Nice poem that brought out the other dark side of this world....10

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Sandra Martyres 17 March 2009

Brings out the darkest side of hate leading to wanton destruction of life and property in the world today very effectively....good write Satish

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