Wednesday, July 2, 2014

Uncle Benu's Ghost Comments

Rating: 5.0

Uncle Benu preferred his evenings alone
When sun touched the western horizon
He would make himself a cup of tepid milk
And without showing a sign of worldly care
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 02 July 2014

Very interesting.... There are such specimen characters who intrigue us in more than one way.... The real comedy is revealed through your mother's question.... Enjoyed!

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Colleen Courtney 02 July 2014

Ha! This is so great! ! ! Gotta love that last line! Such a great write! Captivating throughout and then that zinger of a hilarious last line! Well done!

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Gajanan Mishra 02 July 2014

very beautiful, I like it and its forms.

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