Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Under The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I look at the moon I can see your face
Under the moon I bathe in its light and wish for just one embrace
The embrace of a loved one, the one that I hold dear to me
To see into your eyes, our tears of joy reflect the moonlight.
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Justin Terrell
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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 November 2015

Beautiful love poem and longings for the love displayed. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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M Asim Nehal 11 November 2015

Superb, remembering the beloved while seeing the moon is amazing and then writing a poem on what you feel is wonderful...I enjoyed it. I invite you to read my poems,

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Justin Terrell

Justin Terrell

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