Under The Stars Poem by Elle Jay E..

Under The Stars

Rating: 5.0


Underneath the stars I sleep waiting for the clouds to weep.
On me and relieve my pain.
From the days I have to strain to think.
Because I erased the memory.
I dont like to think about that day.
You came and took my mind away.
I didnt know at the time.
That I would be writing this rhyme.
Later on now i regret.
Seeing your face and hugging your chest.
I saw the danger in your eyes.
Their was nothing to disguise.
It was out in the open and I knew it too.
The way you stared their was something not right about you.
I knew I shouldve just ran away.
But their was no place to stay.
I stayed and stared up at the moon.
Until I heard the boom of the base.
My heart sped up, and my feet should've too.
But I just stayed.
Thats how I met you.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
How i met someone. Its a long story.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 22 April 2012

Outburst of the heart freely flowing through this well crafted and poignant write! Powerful and touching write that clearly shows your feelings and talent! I love it! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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