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Undone

Rating: 5.0

Look into the mirror
wondering to myself
have the years truly been kind

Catch it there on my cheek
another damn tear
trying to escape

And it aint all been in vain
or hard lessons learned in life

Can't say that I regret anything
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Wan Little 24 July 2006

Undone......how i like the way you wrote it Daniel. Someday, i hope, you'll done whatever is stuck in your heart. Wan

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Francesca Johnson 24 July 2006

Saying goodbye to a loved one and actually meaning it may be two different things, as you have shown in this well-written and enjoyable poem. Love, Fran xx

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