My Lady Eagle

Rookie (08/12/1989 / Caloocan, Philippines)

Undying - Poem by My Lady Eagle

And with this love,
I'm good as dead.

So go
To where my heart cannot reach you.
Go east
Or west.
Sail
Or even fly.
But don't forget to breathe.

Breathe as if you're dying.
Live.
Live fully
And don't look back;

For I'm infinitely loving,
For I'm undyingly in love.


Comments about Undying by My Lady Eagle

  • (4/19/2010 4:37:00 AM)


    Hmmm... You are really romantic, but it sounds good (i'm not romantic type) . U have very good expression of your feelings. Your lady is imaginary beautiful, and your senses for her are high and clear. it is very nice. But be careful with short sentences, they maybe can sound empty. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/15/2010 9:41:00 AM)


    You really are a lover of love! I loved this poem! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 12:14:00 PM)


    wow, deep sensations, well chosen words and a strong catching tone, I loved it
    Ro'ya
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 9, 2010



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