Undying Poem by My Lady Eagle

Undying

Rating: 5.0


And with this love,
I'm good as dead.

So go
To where my heart cannot reach you.
Go east
Or west.
Sail
Or even fly.
But don't forget to breathe.

Breathe as if you're dying.
Live.
Live fully
And don't look back;

For I'm infinitely loving,
For I'm undyingly in love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joker Chicago 19 April 2010

Hmmm... You are really romantic, but it sounds good (i'm not romantic type) . U have very good expression of your feelings. Your lady is imaginary beautiful, and your senses for her are high and clear. it is very nice. But be careful with short sentences, they maybe can sound empty.

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 15 April 2010

You really are a lover of love! I loved this poem! ! ! !

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 13 April 2010

wow, deep sensations, well chosen words and a strong catching tone, I loved it Ro'ya

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