My Lady Eagle

Rookie (08/12/1989 / Caloocan, Philippines)

When You Have Few To Say - Poem by My Lady Eagle

However, my heart has few to say
That when you speak or choose not to,
My love, it fades away.

And so I'm silent,
In sails,
Adrift,
As if my breathing
Can always reach you-
Or reach me
At the time being.

But no,
Half of me was lost
Or even was the whole;
Or maybe not-
For I'm complete..
Completely gone insane
Living now an unlived life.

I am uncertain now;
If I'll be coming back
Will you range from me?
Or have you?
'Cause if you do,
'Cause if you did
Then I may have wronged my heart.

I love you
But I let it be unspoken.


Comments about When You Have Few To Say by My Lady Eagle

  • (4/19/2010 10:27:00 PM)


    Hi Jeff Pua,

    Very Nice. Your poems are of Microscopic Level about Love. That's Your Age. I wish you cover more on Life, Nature, Humanity and Everything atleast in your later part of your life. Read my poem 100,000 Love Stories. I recommend this, since you write exclusively on Love, for our existence itself is LOVE.
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  • (4/15/2010 5:43:00 AM)


    very nice confessional poem belonging to lyrism, thank you for sharing...
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  • (4/10/2010 1:39:00 PM)


    Nicely written and really with feelings... (Report) Reply

  • (4/9/2010 9:11:00 PM)


    'But no,
    Half of me was lost
    Or even was the whole;
    Or maybe not-
    For I'm complete..
    Completely gone insane...'

    i like the pacing in your poem...beautiful
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 9, 2010



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