Undying Love Poem by Sora Power Keeper

Undying Love

Rating: 5.0


Love, a feeling I would never understand.
A feeling so very powerful that it makes one do things.
The very same feeling I wanted to feel in a very long time.
The feeling that tore my heart into pieces.

The one who I loved,
Abandoned me for another individual.
That I can never understand why.
The differences of humans are called into question.

The thing that defines one human from another,
Is the very thing that tore my heart and soul.
The feeling of being cursed, crushed and even burned!
I felt on that very day!

Now all that is left of me is myself,
To just think over and over again on that specific time.
Nothing can I do,
But just stare into blankness and think.

I have lost my faith in myself.
Why did this happen to me I always ask,
Is it beacuse of my appereance?
Or is it because of my personality?

But my thoughts changed when i realised,
I was never wrong.
Nothing was in need of change and adjustment.
I was just stupid to be sad about a fly.

Now all I can say is,
I started new,
And will end new.
So just, keep moving forward.

Poem by: Sora (Shaun)
Dedicated to: Wong Shi Jinn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 10 September 2008

always a new beginning that we realize that things are new again... sometimes when we are not in our comfort zone.... we don't know what to do... but for a.. moment things getting right of where to go.... undying love never it ends... just..a retreat to begin again a new beginning... i like your poem... kept it up....i salute thank you 10/10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 September 2008

Well said Sora, we tend to blame our self when things go wrong, but these things happen until the right one comes along.. Andrew 10

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