Unending Pain [r] Comments

An horrendous tale expertly narrated. A well texted and nicely thought out poem. Thanks for sharing Alice.

Little wonder that such intrigue, and hatred, would bother your soul Margaret Alice! You are perhaps the brightest angel I know. But it also sparked you to write this beautiful piece..... And such that God created the love - and free will to love - which was so embraced by Nic and Clancy, so too He created Satan and evil. Ying and yang, life's true purpose. It is always preferred to be drawn toward the light of love, to shield one's eyes from evil's blackness. But it exists. And so we must also draw our swords and slash away at the darkness encroaching the light. I will gladly stand that line for you, for eternity sweet Margaret.