Saturday, July 1, 2023

Unexpected Comments

Rating: 4.0

Ever met someone that has you catching your breath?

The way they walk, talk, and laugh.
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Leigh Parham
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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

Your last 5 lines are VERY NICE! ! I give this poem 4 stars. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

line 5: 'falling' in love? ? Again? ? this line needs some better proofreading and 'tweaking' aka small edits (minor modifications) . : )

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

line 3: Is there someone with you in front of the mirror? OR are YOU the one that makes YOU catch your breath? ?

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