Unexpected Poem by Leigh Parham

Unexpected

Rating: 4.0


Ever met someone that has you catching your breath?

The way they walk, talk, and laugh.

It's like looking in a mirror.

Their very presence keeps you on your toes.

You're doing everything you can from falling for them.

Because you don't know if they will catch you

Or let you catch them.

All you know is with them in your life.

You just want to heal from the past trauma

And become the better you that you were meant to be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

Your last 5 lines are VERY NICE! ! I give this poem 4 stars. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

line 5: 'falling' in love? ? Again? ? this line needs some better proofreading and 'tweaking' aka small edits (minor modifications) . : )

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

line 3: Is there someone with you in front of the mirror? OR are YOU the one that makes YOU catch your breath? ?

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