Unfinished Poem by JRose S

Unfinished



Please dont leave me
right when i need you
please come back andd
make everything ok

i want to end this pain
make it all die
im botteling everythin
up once again without you
how can i feel

thoughts interupt others
in my mind
consuming how i feel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mz.Honesty Only 22 January 2008

This is a great poem. You should check out my poem 'You showed me how to pray! '. Tell me what you think.

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