Unfinished Buisness Poem by coco nutt

Unfinished Buisness

Rating: 5.0


So confused, broken and bruised, internally I replay no positive news...
No clear thoughts, hardships I've fought, regrets of meeting you. Scars emotionally and physically.. constant reminders of pain. Thoughts and flashbacks that drive me insane..
year to year, day to day, betrayel and trust has carried me away. Lost in my head, all dark no light, no one to guide me lost all sense of sight.. unfinished buisness that resides in me

Wednesday, August 10, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: confused,dark,lost,trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 10 August 2011

Wow! A sad, painful but heart touching write that really reveals what you are going through! Coco, you are not alone! We all go through similar situation and find the ways to survive and become stronger after with learned the lesson, finding the desire and strength to move on with our new heart and vision. Like I did when I wrote the poem title: IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, hoping you find the time to read it and enjoy it! For your poignant write I give you a solid 10+++ Keep writing and let it all out and you will see the final result! God Bless you for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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coco nutt

los angeles california
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