Uninspiring Love Poem by Dosvedanya Rashia

Uninspiring Love

Rating: 5.0


My Eyes on the ground,
Littered it with tears and scorn
The remnants of him

Rotting on pavement.
A lurid pattern of slime;
Horrid, grotesque yuck

I abandon it
Baking on the grey cement
To feed some poor ant.

What a farce my Love!
That yourself has so become,
In exultation!

Upgraded to this
High position of status
In the earth worm’s eye

Ah, if you could see
His joyous feast upon thee!
Undiscerning eyes

Rapturous, as he
Lowers himself to embrace
Your wonderful gift!

A toothless mouth of
Mucus, opening to grasp
All you rejected,

Dear one,
I smile at the fate;
Your words of such profound love
Reduced to this mush
Of sad superficiality

Where will it end now?
I walk away into the hot sun
Like a mirage Fading into bleakness and
Leave behind my spit, my cares,
And my world, sans everything

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 28 April 2018

Where will it end now? I walk away into the hot sun Like a mirage Fading into bleakness and Leave behind my spit, my cares, And my world, sans everything.. very fine expressions and the use of words .. amazing........ thank u dear poet. tony

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Keith Hendrickson 11 September 2009

love it as a whole but i really liked the way you began and ended this. as always your words are so amazingly put together. nice writing

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Obinna Eruchie 07 September 2009

Touching it is. Interesting.

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