Uninspiring Love Comments

Where will it end now? I walk away into the hot sun Like a mirage Fading into bleakness and Leave behind my spit, my cares, And my world, sans everything.. very fine expressions and the use of words .. amazing........ thank u dear poet. tony

love it as a whole but i really liked the way you began and ended this. as always your words are so amazingly put together. nice writing

Touching it is. Interesting.