Unknown Poem by Amanda Youngblood

Unknown

Rating: 4.5


Outside standing alone following the sorrows that lye ahead of me.

My eyes are open, but it's difficult to see.

The pouring rain coming down my face.

The feeling of pain you're unable to see.

The blur of the very beginning.

Began with an 'Once upon a time', ended with a 'The End'.

The shadow of us together, now washed away.

Never regrets, but pain and fear.

The secrets told, and similarities shared are now apart.

The thought of forever ends now with your someone new.

In fear of opening my heart and breaking down my wall.

I gave it another try. I failed.

I find myself hoping that one day you will return to unblock that wall built inside me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Lenihan 24 October 2012

A beautiful poem, by a beautiful girl. She is coming into her own with her words. Congratulations Bloody Young! !

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